Kei Uchiha
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Kei Uchiha
Name ~ Kei Uchiha
Gender ~ Female
Age ~ Fifteen
Element ~ Fire and Air
Rank ~ S-rank nin
Loyalties ~ To Hakashin Uchiha
Appearance ~ Long dark blue hair that, depending on the lighting, can look anywhere from black to sky blue. She has blue eyes that, like her hair, can appear to change tints based on the lighting.
Personality ~ Tends to act annoying, immature, and happy-go-lucky but she easily gets defensive and can have major mood swings. She also prefers to not fight someone if she has the choice (unless it's her brother) and when she does fight she uses the minimum amount of her abilities possible.
History ~ She was born in the village hidden in the leaves to the Uchiha clan. Ever since she was born her older brother had been the main family she has, especially after their parents and most of their clan was slaughtered leaving only her and her brother alive. She began ninja training earlier than most people and by the age of thirteen made the rank of a jōnin, nearly dying in the process. That year her brother left the leaf village and she was told that as he was escaping a group of ANBU caught up with him and killed him. Upon hearing this her Mangekyō Sharingan awoke. Her intelligence and speed increased as she continued her training but her taijutsu was always poorly lacking and a chunin, perhaps even a genin, could outmatch her in strength.
Two years later on the night that she turned fifteen her brother that she had thought to be deceased, showed up out of nowhere to convince her to leave the village with him. When she eventually agreed they left the village but were being chased by a member of the ANBU Black Ops and she was able to kill him. When he and her brother were finally clear of the village she hardly left his side but on an occasion when she did they found out that they can speak with each other through telepathy. Since then she has stayed close to her brother at almost all times and her being over protective of him is her biggest weakness as she would put herself in danger to save his life.
Abilities ~ Kekkei Genkai - Sharingan and Mangekyō Sharingan
She is also able to use Amaterasu, Shadow Clone Technique, Crow Clone Technique, Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body, Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change, Demonic Illusion: Shackling Stakes, Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique, Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique, and Tsukuyomi.
Tools/Weapons ~ She doesn't carry any weapons on her but if the need for a weapon arises she summons kunai knifes.
(Hakashin has permission to godmodd this character)
Gender ~ Female
Age ~ Fifteen
Element ~ Fire and Air
Rank ~ S-rank nin
Loyalties ~ To Hakashin Uchiha
Appearance ~ Long dark blue hair that, depending on the lighting, can look anywhere from black to sky blue. She has blue eyes that, like her hair, can appear to change tints based on the lighting.
Personality ~ Tends to act annoying, immature, and happy-go-lucky but she easily gets defensive and can have major mood swings. She also prefers to not fight someone if she has the choice (unless it's her brother) and when she does fight she uses the minimum amount of her abilities possible.
History ~ She was born in the village hidden in the leaves to the Uchiha clan. Ever since she was born her older brother had been the main family she has, especially after their parents and most of their clan was slaughtered leaving only her and her brother alive. She began ninja training earlier than most people and by the age of thirteen made the rank of a jōnin, nearly dying in the process. That year her brother left the leaf village and she was told that as he was escaping a group of ANBU caught up with him and killed him. Upon hearing this her Mangekyō Sharingan awoke. Her intelligence and speed increased as she continued her training but her taijutsu was always poorly lacking and a chunin, perhaps even a genin, could outmatch her in strength.
Two years later on the night that she turned fifteen her brother that she had thought to be deceased, showed up out of nowhere to convince her to leave the village with him. When she eventually agreed they left the village but were being chased by a member of the ANBU Black Ops and she was able to kill him. When he and her brother were finally clear of the village she hardly left his side but on an occasion when she did they found out that they can speak with each other through telepathy. Since then she has stayed close to her brother at almost all times and her being over protective of him is her biggest weakness as she would put herself in danger to save his life.
Abilities ~ Kekkei Genkai - Sharingan and Mangekyō Sharingan
She is also able to use Amaterasu, Shadow Clone Technique, Crow Clone Technique, Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body, Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change, Demonic Illusion: Shackling Stakes, Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique, Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique, and Tsukuyomi.
Tools/Weapons ~ She doesn't carry any weapons on her but if the need for a weapon arises she summons kunai knifes.
(Hakashin has permission to godmodd this character)
Last edited by Kei on Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:24 pm; edited 2 times in total
Re: Kei Uchiha
There is a number of things here that need to be explained or changed. First off, the Mangekyo Sharingan; it requires that you kill your closest friend and feel the pain of such a loss. You include nothing about this in the history. The next issue is really my fault; as I have failed to say this. This is a stand alone rp; it has nothing to do with the Naruto anime/manga other than it being they are both set in the same setting. The Akatsuki does not exist here. We are currently working on a plot. I personally have no problem if you wish to have your character as one of the villains, but this is not entirely up to me as the plot idea isn't my own. Although there are instances in the Naruto storyline where someone, such as Itachi, reaches a very high position at a very young age, its over-powered to have such characters in an rp. You also don't explain how she has obtained Madara's Space Time Ninjutsu. The Tei no dizorubu technique is too strong. Madara can do essentially the same thing but only for about five minutes. Lastly, the rules state that at least one weakness, preferably two or more, must be stated in the character's profile.
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